Do you like this poem?it is pretty good, dont you think?ANSWERE!!?

engulf in sadness,this pool of sorrow,the pool my tears,all still and clea.the one i loved,the one i cared,gone for ever,nothing shared.his pulse has stopped,me alone clutching his hand of a bone.limp and frail,i see a failed,all my loved i trailed.that knife the murder plunged, painful more than a gun.blood and tears now together,help me please,i cant get wetter.why oh why did he leave me?my heart is wounded, i dont feel free.now in a cage am i,when he died, i cant image what he felt,that endless pain, that agony,no more love a prosperity.my wedding gown,stained with him,his wedding suit torn so thin.love is so hard and deep,i feel like droening in the sea so deep.the spring morning, now my death, i wish we died,not just him.water seeping in the window i yell a howl to let out my pain.orange brown hair,his was now in flames.i pick him up with every little hope.i felt his heart,i felt a thump.how can this be,dead today,yet lives to day.no more limps hand,but warm one.there the sun,hope